For our bulletin board border we had our children first draw themselves planting the potatoes on an index card and then had them draw what they thought the potatoes would look like when they were ready to harvest. The picture to the left is one of my favorites! I guess we forgot to discuss that the potatoes actually grow as part of the roots under the ground! The children are going to be quite surprised that they don't see the potatoes growing as leaves and flowers! Can't wait til harvest time!
We decided to use our potato planting papers for our bulletin board. It was especially difficult to choose just four pieces of work, because there were so many that we really adored. Below is Hailey's instructions with her thoughtful and heartfelt opening and closing! Following that is the teacher commentary.
Opening
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You have
to adore Hailey’s introduction - an original.
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Steps
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She has
several steps in her process and uses the transition words
first, next and finally.
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Closing
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Hailey
ties her closing into her introduction by suggesting that
some of the
potatoes might go to Second Harvest.
She goes on
to explain that Second Harvest is a truck that brings food
to people
who are hungry. Love how
she’s thinking!
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Drawings
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Hailey’s
pictures reinforce each step of her procedure
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Capitals
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After an
editing conference, Hailey added capitals at the beginning
of each sentence.
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Punctuation
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She also
added some of the missing punctuation.
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Sight words
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Hailey
spells most sight words correctly without consulting her word wall.
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