One the great things about life at Chets Creek is that we take professional development very seriously. We often provide professional development on the clock but there is a non-negotiable expectation - you are expected to be engaged and to participate. Last week first grade met for a day of professional development while our students were treated to a special all-Resource day. The students really look forward to their special day, and for us, it means no lesson plans for subs!
The day always starts with a demonstration lesson. Maria Mallon hosted all 14 of us in her classroom for a Lucy-inspired (Lucy Calkins) lesson. We are just beginning the second bend of Informational Writing. Maria is our grade level lead so her job is to stay just a few lessons ahead of the pack so she can prepare us for what is to come. She and Reading Coach Melanie Holtsman worked together to provide the perfect day.
The thing that always impresses me about Maria is that her classroom is just so joyful. I can just imagine being a little first grader sitting on the floor at her feet. I would believe every single thing she said! She is so genuine and it just pulls you right in. I just feel good in her room. It just makes me smile. Of course, there is also a lot of learning going on. Her rituals and routines are such perfection that you feel like you want to rewind and figure out, "How did she do that?" The children transition with such ease. On this day she transitioned with a song for fluency. The kids went soundlessly to their seats on the floor and she started... First she told them how incredible they were and how proud she was. Then she launched into the gist of the lesson - which was about using all the tools in the room - the charts and rubrics and mentor texts and words around the room... Then it was off to writing. The children look like busy little bees. Every single child is engaged in the process of writing and the only sounds you hear are productive conversations between partners. Maria does drive by conferences, walking around purposefully stopping to chat with a few students, asking purposeful questions and just generally supervising the flow of the workshop. Before you know it, it's time to Close and the children quietly put all their supplies away and in a blink are back on the carpet. When they are settled Maria reads the informational rubric and challenges the children to work toward the second grade standards. You can see the excitement in their little bodies as they already begin to rise to the occasion. I think I want to be a first grader again in Maria's class!
Then it's to the conference room where we debrief the lesson with Melanie, commenting on the things that we really liked in the lesson, asking Maria questions about things we still wonder about. I think each of us questions how we would do the same lesson and we make a mental list of things we want to try or change tomorrow. That's what "starting with a demo" is all about.
Then it's to the work of the day. As we wait for the Calkins Reading Units to be released this summer, we know we need to ramp up our reading instruction. Melanie digs in and begins to challenge us to push the continuum of thinking in our classrooms. She frames the work that will be expected in second and third and fourth grade that is changing with the Common Core so that we begin to define a path from where we are to where we need to go. Melanie doesn't give us the answers. She doesn't spoon feed us but challenges us to think. We don't need dummy-proof curriculums. We don't need scripted Core Curriculums but we do need teachers that think. We need teachers who can look at the data, but so much more than that - teachers who can read the room, who KNOW their students as learners and from that wealth of information can take the standards and define the teaching that needs to be done. That's what will transforms education.
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Thursday, December 8, 2011
Writing Reports in Kindergarten
In Kindergarten children begin to write reports by writing about themselves. After all, what subject do they know more about than themselves?! This unit comes during our annual Pow Wow celebration so it is natural that many of our kinder classes choose the tribe that they are studying to write their next report. Thus was the case in Debbie Harbour and Tenean Wright's kindergarten class. Their bulletin board this month reflects the reports that some of the children wrote about the Nez Perce tribe.
The bulletin board includes the reports of four of the children with the teacher's commentary and many pictures from the Pow Wow event. Below is one student's report and the teacher's commentary.
They use buffalo skin. Their teepees face east. They eat fish. Indian kids play with dogs and in the winter they stay in longhouses. Nez Perce can shoot 10 arrows in the air before the first ones fall down.
The bulletin board includes the reports of four of the children with the teacher's commentary and many pictures from the Pow Wow event. Below is one student's report and the teacher's commentary.
They use buffalo skin. Their teepees face east. They eat fish. Indian kids play with dogs and in the winter they stay in longhouses. Nez Perce can shoot 10 arrows in the air before the first ones fall down.
They ride Appaloosas. They sleep in tepees. Indians have stew to heat up the fish.
Commentary: Patrick wrote easily about the Nez Perce tribe we have been studying in class. He recalled eight different facts and used pictures to help support his text. It is obvious that Patrick has made the letter sound connection and can sound out many of the words that he does not know how to spell. He also has mastered the spelling and use of many sight words (they, in, up, the...)
Wednesday, March 9, 2011
Demo-teaching 2011
One of the best things about Chets Creek is that we do lots of demo-teaching which means doing demonstration lessons for our peers and for visitors. Today I had the pleasure of watching a demonstration lesson by co-teachers Carrie McLeod and Laurie Thompson. Our Standard's Coach Suzanne Shall arranged the lesson for both the Reading Council and primary Science Council which means the teachers watching the lesson were the grade level leads for Reading and Writing at each grade level and the grade level Science leads for the primary school, plus, of course, the Standard's Coach and Principal. No pressure! I am sure Carrie and Laurie had a moment of stressful concern, wondering why they ever agreed to do this, but Chets Creek is a forum where risk-taking is admired and celebrated, and it is a safe environment where peers support and help each other... so they took a deep breath... and it was - on with the show!
Work Session: As the students divided into small groups (effortlessly!) they each received a 2nd grader's report that had been completed in years past (pulled from cum writing portfolios). Each of the small groups worked independently until they were joined by one of the two teachers to discuss their noticings and labeling. All of the observing teachers were either watching one of the presenting teachers meet with a small group or were soon sitting with a small group themselves helping the children through the task, asking them questions about what they were learning and generally thinking about how they could redesign some of their own work after seeing the lesson.

The room was full of artifacts to support the learning that is being integrated. For instance, it is obvious how the day is integrated when you look at the essential questions posted each day.
You can see some of the earlier mini-lessons as you read some of the charts that are hanging around the room. 


As students completed their noticings of the 2nd grade reports, they went to their independent reading, half of the students on the floor reading and half reading in their seats. As the students read quietly Laurie pulled a small group together to reinforce the strategies of text features in a non-fiction leveled book that was on this small group's reading level.
At the same time, Carrie, pulled a different small group to go over testing strategies of a state assessment-style non-fiction test. I am assuming this group was pulled together after a task analysis of last week's assessment to work with the students that had specific difficulties with specific types of non-fiction questions.
The point is that both of these small groups are off the topic that is echoing across the day!
Closing: The presenting teachers chose two groups as they were circulating to present in the closing. Each group had chosen one example to highlight for the larger group - a text feature that they had noticed and labeled with a stickie note.
Writers' Workshop
Mini-lesson: The teachers began with connecting today's lesson with what the students were doing in reading and what they are doing in Science, which is a habitat and life cycles unit. For the teach the teachers are using butterflies as their example of a topic for writing a report. The students have plenty of background knowledge for this example because they are raising butterflies during Science. The teachers have a seed journal where they have been taking notes about caterpillars and butterflies. As the students begin their writing, they will each choose different animals to write a report on its habitat and life cycle. Some of the previous lessons are obvious, both from charts in the room and the teacher's seed journal example. Today's lesson was on how to organize the notes from the seed journal. The teacher thinks aloud her decision to start with a chapter on "Appearance" and then numbers her notes so that the sequence makes sense. For the active involvement she then turns to a new page in the seed journal where she has taken notes and has the children "turn and talk" about how they would organize this page of information. The link gives the children the facts they need to use the information they have just learned as they go into the work session.
The point of this lesson was to show both Reading, Writing and Science teachers what echoes across the day can look like. We know that we get a bigger bang for our buck when we are able to integrate the Science content into our reading and writing lessons and when we are able to practice those reading and writing skills in Science.
Readers' Workshop
Mini-lesson: Today's big topic in reading was Reading Like a Writer. Carrie and Laurie, whose rituals and routines are crisp and clean, began with a mini-lesson connecting today's lesson with the bigger topic. Next for the teach, they showed the students a report written by a 2nd grader (completed in 2nd grade but pulled from a 4th grader's cum writing portfolio!) The teachers identified some of the text features in the report, such as the Table of Contents, words highlighted that were found in the Glossary, headings, captions, etc. - all text features that had been covered in earlier lessons. Then the teachers labeled each noticing with a stickie note.
For the active involvement they turned to a new page of the report and had the students "turn and talk" about their noticings so that the students could practice the strategy that had just been demonstrated. The teachers pulled the group back together and had them share out their labeled noticings. The link involved giving each group of two or three students a different 2nd grade report to repeat the same - notice and label text features.

Work Session: As the students divided into small groups (effortlessly!) they each received a 2nd grader's report that had been completed in years past (pulled from cum writing portfolios). Each of the small groups worked independently until they were joined by one of the two teachers to discuss their noticings and labeling. All of the observing teachers were either watching one of the presenting teachers meet with a small group or were soon sitting with a small group themselves helping the children through the task, asking them questions about what they were learning and generally thinking about how they could redesign some of their own work after seeing the lesson.




Writers' Workshop
We had the good fortune to be able to stay for the Writers' mini-lesson so that we could see how these same lessons were being incorporated into the writing part of the day. The Writers' Workshop also included the 4-part mini-lesson.

At that point, we had to leave. We had been in the classroom for an hour watching this unforgettable lesson. We will debrief this lesson after school tomorrow. It will be interesting to see if my colleagues took away as much as I did. As for me, there will be things I will tweak and change in my classroom tomorrow because I have had this opportunity today!
Tuesday, February 1, 2011
Another Report
Just had to share Jonah's report on the "Universe." He uses the conventions that he has learned, his background knowledge and his creativity to write this delightful report.
The UNIVERSE and more... 


Table of Contents
All in Matter...1
Space Science...2
Solar System...3
End of the World...4
What's Earth?...5
The Sun...6

All in Matter
All 10 things in the solar system MATTER.
You are matter.
Earth is matter.
The sun is matter.
Space is matter.
Matter is matter.
All of space is matter.
Is matter the universe?

Space Science

Solar System
The three outer planets are Mars, Jupiter and Saturn. The 3 inner planets are Mercury, Venus and Earth!
What's Earth?
Earth is the 3rd planet. It has one moon and its the only planet with life. The moon reflects with the sun. The moon orbits the Earth. The Earth spins and orbits the sun.
The sun is billions of years old. Its gravity is 10000m but it not old enough to do another Big Bang. Its core is very hot! The surface of the sun is 10,000 degrees Fahrenheit, 5531.8 degrees Celsius!
End of the World
We'll end soon! The water will be gone. All gone. We'll die in the SUN! The sun will miss Pluto and turn into a black hole! but this may not happen... or will it?

We'll end soon! The water will be gone. All gone. We'll die in the SUN! The sun will miss Pluto and turn into a black hole! but this may not happen... or will it?
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Informational Writing,
Science,
Sleepover
Sunday, January 23, 2011
Solar System Reports
Lest you think our Sleepover is a bunch of fluff and has no academic backbone, you should know that the event ties into our Science unit on Sun, Stars and the Solar System. But it also is the content for our writing unit on Informational Nonfiction Report Writing. Below is Emma's report on the solar system with each planet as its own chapter.
Our Solar System
Mercury
People and animals can not live on Mercury. Mercury is a planet. Mercury is the first planet by the Sun.

Mercury
People and animals can not live on Mercury. Mercury is a planet. Mercury is the first planet by the Sun.
Venus is the 7th planet. Venus is almost the same size as Earth. It has many volcanoes.
Earth
People can live on Earth. Earth is the third planet. Earth has air and water. Earth has one moon.
Mars has lots of dust. Mars also has caves, rocks, and volcanoes. Mars does not have rings. Mars is the 4th planet.
Jupiter
Jupiter is the 5th planet from the sun. It also has 47 moons. Jupiter is the biggest planet. It is covered with orange clouds.
People cannot live on Saturn because it is cold. Saturn has 60 moons. Saturn's surface is not solid.
Neptune
Neptune does not have a solid surface. Neptune is the 8th planet from the sun. You cannot see Neptune without a telescope
Uranus is blue. People could not walk on Uranus. It also is the 7th planet from the sun.
Pluto
Pluto is a dwarf planet. Pluto is cold because it is far from the sun. Pluto has 3 moons or more. Pluto is the ninth planet.
Sunday, November 22, 2009
Writing About Pow Wow
As we have been moving through our unit on Native Americans, the children have been working on reports about their Native tribes. Most kinder classes began with reports about themselves at the beginning of the nine weeks because there is nothing kindergartners know more about than themselves! During Readers' Workshop the children have been reading and investigating nonfiction text and learning about nonfiction text features such as titles, chapter headings, labels, Table of Contents, etc. The expectation is that children will begin to use these text features as they write their reports.
As the children were beginning to write about their tribes, they had many experiences to build their background knowledge. Each class studied the types of houses the Natives lived in and then built replicas of those houses with their families during Family Night. They learned about what their tribes wore and then helped to dress a cardboard cutout in tribal gear. They also made many of the pieces that they wore during the Pow Wow. The Nootkas learned, for instance, that the spears that they made were used to spear whales. The Seminoles learned that the ribbons they made were used for ceremonial dances. The children learned what the Natives ate and then tasted some of the foods during the Pow Wow activities. Throughout the activities, the stories that they read and the research that they did, each child learned so much that they could write about!
Teachers depend on our Kindergarten Native American wiki for the research about their tribes. The information is continually updated by each teacher each year that teaches the tribe. It saves teachers an enormous amount of time!
As the children were beginning to write about their tribes, they had many experiences to build their background knowledge. Each class studied the types of houses the Natives lived in and then built replicas of those houses with their families during Family Night. They learned about what their tribes wore and then helped to dress a cardboard cutout in tribal gear. They also made many of the pieces that they wore during the Pow Wow. The Nootkas learned, for instance, that the spears that they made were used to spear whales. The Seminoles learned that the ribbons they made were used for ceremonial dances. The children learned what the Natives ate and then tasted some of the foods during the Pow Wow activities. Throughout the activities, the stories that they read and the research that they did, each child learned so much that they could write about!
Teachers depend on our Kindergarten Native American wiki for the research about their tribes. The information is continually updated by each teacher each year that teaches the tribe. It saves teachers an enormous amount of time!
Below is just one example of a kindergartner's writing from Miss Sasso's Hopi tribe. Nate has a title for his book, Nate's The Hopi Book.



Miss Sasso gave each child a form to help them organize a Table of Contents. Nate's Table of Contents includes:
1. What did the Hopi eat? 1
1. What did the Hopi eat? 1
2. What did the Hopi wear? 2
3. Where did the Hopi (live)? 3
4. How did the Hopi travel? 4
5. Snake Dances 5

Nate begins each chapter with a question. Notice also how he uses labels and in this chapter, a list.
What did the Hopi eat?
red beans
yellow orn
rabbits
deer

Girls wear mantas and boys wear kilts.

Where did the Hopi live?
Indians lived in Arizona and adobe. To get up to the top they needed a ladder and windows.

How did the Hopi travel?
The Hopis walk in feet.

Snake Dances
The Hopis need snakes for the Snake Dances.
Labels:
Informational Writing,
Kindergarten,
Pow Wow,
technology,
Wiki
Monday, February 23, 2009
"All About" Reports
Suzanne Shall, our Instructional Coach, recently got a comment on her blog - something to the effect that she should stop posting student work that obviously was done by parents! It was a reminder of how low expectations can tie the hands of our children. Given a daily Readers' and Writers' Workshop beginning the first day of kindergarten, quality instruction and the freedom to choose your topics and write your thoughts, there is no limit to what our first graders can do. Below is just such a piece recently completed during our unit on reports. This engaging report has it all - an introduction and closing, great chapters that stay to the topic, nonfiction conventions (such as a Table of Contents, labels, and even "Fun Facts" as captions to many of the illustrations!) The capitalization and punctuation is almost flawless with excellent word choice and so many words spelled correctly. This is an example of what first graders can do! Enjoy!
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